You're a Bunch of Factors

hey guys i know its been quite a long time since ive put up one of my stand up routines and i have still been doing stand up comedy regularly but i just got a camera and have started uploading videos myself. there will be more but if you have a spare 6 mins check it out, and tell me what u think and be 100% honest.



i have posted this up in entertainment as well i just wanna make sure everyone knows about it

"we were intimate, f*ck, as it were..."

Gold.

I liked it dude! Crowd didn't seem that into it early on, Zack sure enjoyed it though

I thought your skills to recover/ad-lib were excellent, you thought on your feet well and some talent def shined through there. You lead into each joke well, didn't feel like you were reading off a list, etc.

I think there's probably room to cut the routine down a bit, but overall I was impressed dude, I laughed a few times.

Ending was neat.

The facebook joke probably dragged a little regarding the breakup. Needs some polish IMO.

Overall, beginning was slow, but the crowd got into it at the middle and the end. Looked good.

What ever happened to your movie?

Not bad, not bad at all.

And man i've been there before when the condom falls out your wallet, except I don't like to carry a wallet, so I had mine in my pocket. A tad presumptuous perhaps and none the less embarrassing.

Perfectly normal to carry a condom with you.

hey guys thanks for the feedback, im glad u gernrally like it i have to admit that was my first stand up gig since FEB so i was a little rusty. i agree it needed to be polished a little for time etc but i kinda rushed this set together but 90% of that set is based on true storys and event.

as for my movie dead set should have alink up for it within the next 4-6 weeks

todd182 wrote:hey guys thanks for the feedback, im glad u gernrally like it i have to admit that was my first stand up gig since FEB so i was a little rusty. i agree it needed to be polished a little for time etc but i kinda rushed this set together but 90% of that set is based on true storys and event.

as for my movie dead set should have alink up for it within the next 4-6 weeks

Also crowd feel as well. If they aren't getting the joke, change tactics. Crowds will be different each time. Uni crowds will laugh at a facebook/twitter joke, older business crowds probably wouldn't understand.

Though you could always say you got broken up over lamebook, before you saw the facebook. Or twitter, 42 characters to end a 18 month relationship.

lol, def steal Brett's jokes, they're gold.

AceLosesKing wrote:lol, def steal Brett's jokes, they're gold.

I only reach this level of funny when i am sick with cold and flu. Perth weather was freezing, and the regional guys drink.

I am still Victorian drinking Middies, they are WA drinking Pints.
My beer legs haven't returned yet. FML

Brett Kay wrote:

todd182 wrote:hey guys thanks for the feedback, im glad u gernrally like it i have to admit that was my first stand up gig since FEB so i was a little rusty. i agree it needed to be polished a little for time etc but i kinda rushed this set together but 90% of that set is based on true storys and event.

as for my movie dead set should have alink up for it within the next 4-6 weeks

Also crowd feel as well. If they aren't getting the joke, change tactics. Crowds will be different each time. Uni crowds will laugh at a facebook/twitter joke, older business crowds probably wouldn't understand.

Though you could always say you got broken up over lamebook, before you saw the facebook. Or twitter, 42 characters to end a 18 month relationship.

Or just use Bretts Avartar for a f%*#$%g big laugh