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hi everyone just thought i'd let everyone here know that i'm taking part in raw comedy this year, not only am i taking part in australia number stand up contest but i actually won my first heat at the rhino room last wednesday. i'm though to the semi-finals at PJ O'Briens on east terrace on march 4th at 9.30, tickets $15. i don't expect anyone to come but if you would like to see my heat you can youtube raw comedy and just look for todd gray. i'd like some feedback beofre my semi. thanks

the only downside is this is stuffing up my poker season good but a small price to pay.

todd182 wrote:hi everyone just thought i'd let everyone here know that i'm taking part in raw comedy this year, not only am i taking part in australia number stand up contest but i actually won my first heat at the rhino room last wednesday. i'm though to the semi-finals at PJ O'Briens on east terrace on march 4th at 9.30, tickets $15. i don't expect anyone to come but if you would like to see my heat you can youtube raw comedy and just look for todd gray. i'd like some feedback beofre my semi. thanks

the only downside is this is stuffing up my poker season good but a small price to pay.

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I'm confident you'll do well Todd, you always had the personality and humour to succeed as a comedian.

Everyone can check out Todd here.

Nice debut Toddy, you had some good jokes in there. Gave me a few chuckles.

Think you might want to avoid the laughter is the best medicine gag.
Have heard it too many times. Wil Anderson, Robin Williams a few others.

The Orphan in the reject shop was good.

Going with the offensive/crude jokes seem to work for you. Thought it was very good overall.

When you make it into the finals, there will be one victorian in the crowd going i knew him before he was famous.

Good Luck Todd.

p!ssed myself at the German shepherd

no probs ill drop the medicine line that aint original your right i put it in cause i heard in somewere before. thanks alot guys glad to have some support i should say now that i aint racist but man when i thought some of those jokes i just had to work them in. i've only got about 15mins of material working on some more but that's kinda my A grade. fingerscrossed.

thanks again guys.

well done todd, it was pretty funny. german shepherd joke was hilarious.

i reckon that osama jokes are fairly well worn and behind the times though, but the joke still worked, and it was still pretty funny.

PS osama would say "i swear to allah" not god.

overall very good mate, well done. keep it up

ah you got me there benny the cunt, i picked that up when i watched it you're right osmam would say that. but thanks anyway benny the cunt

other than that, i thought it was excellent mate. hope to see u on rove some day. better than a lot of "comedians" out there

Yeah the Osama jokes were in my opinion, stale. Too easy a target. The virgin bit at the start worked well, though. You can't rely on that every week, however.

All in all great for a virgin

that guy laughing next to the camera is soooo annoying, worst laugh ever